Early in the morning...

simple

Early in the morning 

it is so boring...

half awake in the bed 

mosquitoes sucking our blood

Author's Note

on the construction of the poem.....

Reviews

[milestone]

don't you hope to add more verses to this..add some...keep writing..your poems are simple..and nice.

[Zoya]

i will consider that ... thank u

[Zoya]

oook i simply wrote it once ... after that i didnt consider writing more .. thats y..:)

[Chris]

A fair start for a new day... a little "dry" - explains the morning thirst.

[Zoya]

hm.......... :)

[Chris]

Having a sense of humor always helps keep seriousness at bay.

[Zoya]

ok... :)

[Akshat♥]

lol...nice one
it happens with me all the time :P
short and sweet :)
Keep writing!!

[Zoya]

thanku

[Akshat♥]

:)