My first day in school

first day at school

My first day in school ,

              it was not so cool.

At each step that  i take,

             i felt a tremble shake.

At me everybody was gazing

            and my heart was racing.

I was feeling so alone,

           with all my peace stolen.

While all my walk,

         i could feel butterfiles in my stomach.

My first day in school ,

         it was not so cool.

Author's Note

i m a beginner.. u r free to criticise....

Reviews

[The Nude Writer]

I think this is wonderful :) I think we all remember that first day and how wicked it was :)

[milestone]

mm..nice rhyming..''at me everybody was gazing ,and my heart was racing'' that is the best part..I like it..

[Zoya]

thank you !!!

[Chris]

We all began at one point... Welcome to WC

Find your rhythm and don't work so hard on the rhyme.

[Zoya]

yah i like that kind.... i m just a beginner... thanks!! i will try....

[Akshat♥]

wow..i felt same when i got o school:)
lovely write..
Keep writing!!

[Zoya]

thank u

[Akshat♥]

u r welcome :)