The Power of Words �continues

...this is a response to the poem, The power of words #1 by my friend Yos. it is a continuation of those thoughts from the other side...to get the proper understanding, please read his poem first. thanks

 

 

 

The Power of Words …continues

 

The power of words

The unexpected evil

Playing the game of deception

Luring the woman to the poison inside

Betraying the thing she wanted most

Piercing the heart of her lover

Shattering the hard earned trust

 

The power of words

Touched, but untouched

Her steadfast refusals,

Staying true to her love

The words of evil

Come back to haunt the woman

Her naïveté, her unseeing eyes

Never suspects the trap being set

 

Using the power to seek the truth

The words get used to destroy

Turned back on the woman,

Committed to sin of the darkest night,

Springing the trap…

Bitter the taste of the apple

And the betrayal

 

The powerful weapon, wielded

With the accuracy of a sword

Cuts deeper than anything else

The evil spreads like a cancer

Darkening the inner light

Leaving her dead inside,

Crumpled with despair

Feeling the remorse of loss

 

 

agt  9 March 2009  

Author's Note

...i hope that everyone gets the gist of this and Yossi write...let us know what you think. AT

Reviews

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

I understood them both perfectly. The power of words is an enormous thing! I could go on forever about them, but I like your current discipline and focus here. The affect of these words as they relate to women.

"Using the power to seek the truth
The words get used to destroy
Turned back on the woman,
Committed to sin of the darkest night,"

Beautifully penned and written. I've come to expect a perfect choice of words, and even some words I never knew existed, from you. You've never disappointed me thus far! Great write!

[Lalli]

How easily how words can be turned against us... how powerful they can be, and how easily they can be used for evil.

very inspiring amanda. I enjoyed it.

sometimes don't we just wish we could take back what we said, since we spoke before we thought... especially when that regret is amplified as they are used against us.

much love n' respect

-Lalli