Oh YAY for you... .this piece is quite triumphant!! I love it. Yes, I'm corny, but I have to say that this piece is as soothing as the breeze you write about. Very, very good work here. That's what I think!! Keep stretching... love to see what else you write outside your box!
Where you are at with this poem is right there with greatness. I really enjoyed that as a reader you acknowledge love as it crept to you and we shared in that same discovery. Its like waking up happy because everything is perfect. I enjoyed this piece as I do all of your work. I like that I am starting my day with this poem. Thanks for the blessing. Standing "O".
Would love to know exactly what this breeze was. When you finish with it send it over to me in the UK. Very refreshing poem that does not necessarily return to male / female relationships. The breeze could be music, religion, a book, or just cool thought! Leaves one wanting the next episode. PLEASE.
That was nice, a very peaceful write indeed. I felt 'good' while reading this. You've put up your feelings in a superb way!!
Though I wanted to ignore it,
Very nice write. Almost fantasized to where I started seeing the picture of the woman you have going through the accounts within this piece. Very descriptive with a lot of middle age romanticism. Dope write!
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