For You, My Love

For You, My Love

A Poem by Amanda

Though I have told you

That I would be your shelter,

Sometimes I feel that I

Cannot protect you from all the evils

In the world or in your heart

It makes me cry to think that I can’t

 

If I could, I would take away the fears, the hurt

I would hold you tight and make it alright

I would wrap you in the security

That you so desperately need

But you are so far away,

All I can only do is send you my love

 

I pray to the Lord

That you will be fine

And that you will feel my love

Across the distance

Think of me and I will be there,

In your heart and in your mind

 

As you are always in mine….

 

 

 

© 2009 Amanda


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Awe you really show such inspirational and pure love... I love that you show how you want to do everything you can to protect that special one but admit it can't always be, that is real life... and that it hurts to know you can't shows deep humanity. Very touching my friend.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I love the image that goes with this fantastic poem. What a very sincere and creative write. I am sorry it took so long for me to get to this I am playing catch up after not having a computer for two weeks. I have enjoyed your work and i look forward to reading more of it. Any book in the works?

Posted 15 Years Ago


Beautiful. Almost sounds like it's for your child, but it could be for anyone you love.
I need to have my wife read this. Our son has schizophrenia, and there's very little she can do.
except worry. Rain..

Posted 15 Years Ago


Oh, my talent, you are so in love!
What a beautiful feeling you have...
your words:
"If I could, I would take away the fears, the hurt
I would hold you tight and make it alright
I would wrap you in the security
That you so desperately need"

What wonderful words you write as your heart sings with such passion!
I love when a poet is in love ... what passion you write!
(smiling)

You've given your heart to the one who is worthy
and as a romantic poet, I relish in your happiness!

This is beautifully presented!
But of course
it could only come from from an excellent writer!
(wink)

Bravo, my talent, Bravo!

Your fan,
The Duchess...

Posted 15 Years Ago


Such passion is in this piece. Wanting to be there for someone you love and no matter how you try they cant seem to truely understand how much you want them to be happy.
Really wonderful write. And the image is wonderful a perfect ending to the presentation of this piece

Posted 15 Years Ago



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