Whispering Dream

...can you hear hear me whispering to you?....

 

 

In the stillness of the night

In the land of dreams,

Where the alternate realm shines,

There is just you and I

 

No problems, no issues

Just the love we share

The intertwining of our hearts and souls

We are of one mind

 

Everything disappears, left behind,

Nothing can disturb us now

In this reality of our making

All else is nonexistent

 

In this beautiful private garden

Where nothing or no one can touch us

We laugh, we play and we make love

Becoming one with the joining

 

Close your eyes and think of me

For I am never far away,

Take my hand, don’t be afraid

I will show you the way

 

I am the whisper in your heart

And in your mind

I am the whispering dream

That calls to you in the dark.

 

Reviews

[TamiViolet]

Close your eyes and think of me
For I am never far away
Take my hand don't be afraid
I will show you the way

Amanda, you have gone above and beyond with this one as I am left in awe after reading such a perfect combination of desire and love. Verb choice is fantastic...laughing, playing, whispering... making love...
the epitome of all that enables two to become one.

It's fantastic when our whispering dreams surface and become reality.

I am the whispering dream
That calls to you in the dark.

So very, very sensual. Photo enhances both longing and the beauty of love.

Wow, my friend, you're on fire girl! :-)
x

[Emily Elizabeth]

What a beautiful poem! Romantic, alluring, sweet and mysterious. This is reminiscent of first love, when you first enter that magical realm of feeling with someone and you truly connect with them.

In this beautiful private garden
Where nothing or no one can touch us
We laugh, we play and we make love
Becoming one with the joining

This is a gorgeous line, very metaphysical and heavenly!

[Dani California]

Close your eyes and think of me
For I am never far away,
Take my hand, don't be afraid
I will show you the way

Absolutely beautiful! The entire piece is wonderful but this ... this stanza really did it for me. 'close your eyes and think of me for I am never far away..' mmm.... so romantic... with an ethereal touch.

Your muse is really putting in some work girl!! ;) Nice !