How Can You Say....?

...for my someone special :)

How can you say…?

 

That I am in love

When I don’t even know myself?

I feel that there is something

But I am not sure

You are special to me

That I am sure of

 

I care about you

More than I know

I think about you

All my waking hours…

I dream of a time

We will be together

 

I feel you close to me

Though you are not here

I want to touch you

Feel you next to me

Kiss your lips

Taste the whole of you

 

I wish to be with you

Though you are far away

I want to know you

Body and soul

If you will have me

I will be yours.

 

Reviews

[Lyndsay Castro]

I like the honesty in this. You admit you're not sure if you're whole yet, and that takes guts. Whoever you wrote this for is LUCKY!

[Brianna Brie]

Love the font you chose. It adds to the softness of your words. I like it a lot!

[Helen Woodward]

Hi Amanda, this is almost a cry for commitment on the part of one person in a relationship. You are wearing your heart on your sleeve as so many of us do and I'm not sure if that is a good thing.
Your prose is well-placed and expressed with a loving plea, nicely done.
Helen:-)

[Antony]

Amanda, your words....I care about you, you are special to me, I want to know you. All these feelings are very captivating, this is a wonderful expression of emotion.
Antony

[KAREN BROWN]

this is so wonderful to read it touches my heart.what you wrote is how I felt about this man who I married at 17 and he left into the service it brought back so many feeling for me .thank you for sharing this with me.

[Barbara Walker]

This is fairly short, but I see it as starting out not too sure how you feel, but then when you examine how you feel about the person when they aren't there, and find it is more than you thought in the beginning. A sweet write! Barbara

[Fran Marie]

A most passionate piece so well expressed and nicely penned~Fran Marie

[R J Askew]

Very, very, very passionate...almost palpably so. Full on yearning. But what is wrong with that?

[Michael X]

Amanda, this is a heart touching poem and it speaks desire in many facets.. to want the touch.. the warmth .. to embrace that which is close to the heart, I could feel affection puring from your words, the longing to be near, its beautifully rendered and passionate,

reading this, I'm sure many can relate to the meaning, you express in the moment,
and the emotions are honest..real.. speaks truth in reflection,
ode to find the words to say..I believe you said it beautifully, Very Nice,
has a way of pulling the heart strings, sensuous and romantic, you are a natural.
Take Care, Mike

I feel you close to me
Though you are not here
I want to touch you
Feel you next to me
Kiss your lips
Taste the whole of you

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is great...So full of passion and romance!
And the font style is also very appealing... You know love is not gaining someone but it is losing yourself to someone else and I got the same idea while reading this poem.
Great work like always!