Letter to My Love

for someone special....:)

 

 

Though time and distance keep us apart

I think of you and smile

 

I long to hold you close to me

To feel the beating of your heart

To taste the warmth of your kiss

To see you smile as you look upon me

 

I want to be for you

What you are becoming for me

A friend, a lover, a special someone

That will be there always

 

I care for you deeply

I miss you...

 

Love you.

Reviews

[Michael X]

I really enjoy reading love poetry and this writing encapsulates such longing, adoration, affection and
thoughts that travel the cold distance, passing through the readers heart, "Letter to My Love" and one can

feel and get a real sense of the truth being projected for the one close to the heart, Romantic and
lovingly pondered, every word adds subtle, defining detail to the ambracing image as a whole, as to
read is to hold on to the idea that time and distance are mere formalities and have no baring on the

willingness of love, but to create a special moment in time, that is able to cross horizons to make
the sparkle in a lovers eyes that much brighter, I really enjopyed reading this poem Amanda. Thanks.
Take Care, Mike

[Brianna Brie]

Gentle love that just wraps you up in a cocoon. It is so sweet and tender. Thanks for entering the Missing Him, Missing Her contest.

[Helen Woodward]

Beautifully and poignantly said Amanda...I know the feeling :-)

[Mimozi]

Bright and genuine and heart-felt.

[Antony]

This is very heartfelt, I could feel your true emotions in this, short and sweet to the point. very nice Amanda.
Antony

[Enigma]

*woot*
Now that's 'romantic'. Wow!! That was great. I loved it. The flow, the choice of words, the simple approach to intense feelings of love... *sighs*
It flowed so smoothly, right into my heart. Beautifully written...
VERY WELL PENNED!!!

[Bhavya Kaushik]

"I care for you deeply
I miss you...


Love you."

I always love to read poems that focuses on the brighter side of love! The ending actually left me thinking of my girlfriend!
Really, your feelings behind this poem are surely very true and deep, and that is why it turned up into such a warm and romantic piece of writing!
Beautiful...simply beautiful!

[~*666 Draven Von Tepes ..]

still gonna puke

[Dani California]

Amanda, thank you for sending this to me to read!
It really brightened my evening,
being the romantic that I am. lol

So beautiful ... wow

"I long to hold you close to me
To feel the beating of your heart
To taste the warmth of your kiss
To see you smile as you look upon me.."


That stanza sent me off into my own little
world under the stars.... *sigh*

You've really captured the emotions well..

Beautifully penned my friend :) I'm so happy for you
that you found this kind of love!

[~*666 Draven Von Tepes ..]

Blah more mushy I love u stuff :P