Make Me Yours

a collaborative work by Yos and myself....thank you, baby...:)

Though there is distance between us

All I have to do

Is reach out

And touch your heart

 

And you did

When I felt your heart open

Ready to me

I heard you whispering

Just come in

Take me

To your fantasy dream world

 

And in that world

We share our bodies and our minds

We touch

We love

 

We become one

You waited so long

Body and soul

You so close now

 

To have someone love me

To take away the pain

I give myself willingly

To touch and to be touched

To love with all our hearts

 

You are so ready

Just whisper

Take me

Make me

Yours

 

I will be…make me yours

 

Reviews

[The DuchessPoet]

This is beautiful!

[Michael X]

Amanda, I really like the way you and yos brought about the soul romantic aspect
this beautifully consuming work to ponder, as the sensualness of the vision flows
like a cascading waterfall, in saying that your words are alive and with passion,

the messege delivers on more then one level, spiritual yearning to touch another's
soul, to feel what love is held in the heart, the title itself shows the desire

as well as the capture, as I read I could gain the sense of kindred spirits
connecting across distant horizons, this's beautiful work and a pleasure to read.
Take Care, Mike

[Bluet_Belle]

I like the message in this:)

And i understand, as you know, i well understand.

You two write well togeather, and i give you my best wishes:)

[Lalli]

awwww the easing of pain through the love of another. there are few better feelings int his world

well expressed, it was verymuch written from the heart... and that is where all the best poetry comes from.

great write amanda,

much love n respect

-Lalli

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

You such a sensative soul :) , its so easy to get into your heart, you truly ready to be loved Yos

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is really a very passionate piece of writing...Each and every line has been quoted so beautifully..
Awesome!

[R J Askew]

Lovely job of capturing the real feelings that remote love can generate.

[~*666 Draven Von Tepes ..]

nice write but a love poem? I never thought i would see u write this and a little to mushy and gross for my taste Not bad though

[Dani California]

Lovely A! Just lovely ... ! :)

"To have someone love me
To take away the pain
I give myself willingly
To touch and to be touched
To love with all our hearts..."

I think we all look for this .... want this.
Some say no, but I believe they are just in
protective mode. Been there too.

This is a stunning poem full of love and desire...
and passion. You both did a marvelous job conveying those
emotions... truly.

Beautiful!

[Dalaina Renee]

Very beautiful!