My Inspiration

 

You are my inspiration

The very thing of my existence

Before you I was nothing

Empty and alone

Now I am complete.

 

You fulfill my every dream...

The touch of your hand

The petal soft feel of your lips

The warmth of your strong embrace

The heat of your body pressed against mine.

 

I love you with my heart and soul

Your love surrounds me

Wrapping me in its passionate way

Your love is boundless

A love without end.

 

 

For your love

For your strength

For your belief in me

I will always be grateful to you.

 

 

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Very beautiful !! Lovely indeed..
Raw and vivid , full of warm feel and great emotion of love(which I always admire)
Great devotion and well dedication of love :)
I'll surely give a read request of this write to my girlfriend to inspire her to write anything like this for me too....lolz.. :D just kidding :)
Great work :)

[Emily Elizabeth]

This poem really captured a moment and a mood. And what a beautiful moment and mood it is! Thank you so much for sharing. Your poems always warm the heart. You write about love in the most sweet, innocent and honest way, devoid of everything but the true emotion at the very centre of it. You really are blessed with the gift of words, m'dear!

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What can I say Amanda? Congratulations!!! There is such love in these words that it is breathtaking...
Helen :-)))

[Amanda Crandall]

Very sweet I really enjoy the last stanza.

[Steffi]

Beautiful.

You envoked emotions very well for the audience.

Good Write

[Brandon]

Very nicely written. Definitely hits you in the sweet spot of your heart.

[Barbara Walker]

A strong, beautiful poem for the one you love, who loves you. I hope you gave this to him! I'm sure he would love it. Good read! Barbara

[Dead Angel]

wow mandy, very beautifully written! such a lovely way to write about inspriation, very well done! :)

[Brenda Sue]

So very pure and romantic. Very well written. Beautifully penned. Great job.

[Corey Lunare-]

this poem shows greatly the love we all have once in our lives towards that one person who just makes us feel like we never have before! that amazing feeling is captured here in your poem with great skill. You did a great job on this peice. I'm looking forward to reading your next! Thank you