Life is a Journey

Life is a Journey

A Poem by Amanda

 

Life is a journey, not just a destination

To walk the path, one must choose

The choices we make in life are never as easy

Most ramble aimlessly, for they do not choose

 

The easy choice is to do nothing.

If there is no purpose, no goal set to reach

No looking to where that destination will lead

The journey may be useless, a life unfulfilled.

 

The questions one may ask are just as clear

What is my purpose?

Why am I here?

Where am I going?

Is there something better than this?

 

Life is a journey, not just a destination

To chose the best of all the possibilities

To serve one’s purpose to be

The choices made are ultimately yours to make.

 

© 2008 Amanda


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Yes Amanda, the choices we make and the accountability we need to have for the result. That is a world wide issue...no accountability for our own decisions. This is very eloquently put together with a refreshing font. It contains truth, which is something seldom seen or heard. I hope many read this and heed its message...
Love
Helen xx

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is such a great write, So much deep and true indeed..
I loved it :)

Life is a journey, not just a destination - Very well written! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is good! I love the structure! I think the way you wrote this piece helps place more power behind your words. I have to agree with the others. It is a good message!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Very good message to bear in mind.

Posted 16 Years Ago


What is my purpose?
Why am I here?
Where am I going?

You have pinpoined the exact question tha EVERY person asks themselves at one point in their life. Life is just a series of choices but together in order. you are absolutely right in every aspect. I enjoyed this piece very much. You purpose is what you decide it is. beautiful poem...


PS- Final Fantasy is my life! lol. just thought i would add that.


Posted 16 Years Ago


What is my purpose? A subject matter many can relate to and let's hope more people realize if they just have their eyes on the destination, they're missing all the scenery along the way! Barbara

Posted 16 Years Ago


Wow Amanda, you words always inspire me, deep thought and deep questions in this onee. I love it

Love
Me

Posted 16 Years Ago


An open mind is a journey it's self through vast lands of one's domain who you are is what you become and what you are is higher than human

Posted 16 Years Ago


very insightful!! well written and very passionate. well done mandy!! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


Very well stated and good advice. Wonderfully penned.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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