My Perfect Rose

for my best friend and his lady love

 

Seeing you leave just breaks my heart

I know that you will only be gone for a few days

But still I can’t bear to see you go

You have captured my heart so completely

That I cannot breathe, cannot think without you

When we are apart, I think only of you

Nothing else matters.

 

You have my heart, my very soul

So much in love I am with you

I have fought long and hard to have you for my own

And now I cannot live without you

So now, I have to watch you go

Be safe, my love and come back to me

I will be here waiting for you.

 

For you are my perfect rose.

 

Reviews

[April Child]

Yes it kind of takes you over when you fall for someone. Its all here in your words, that almost obsessive, desperate need to be with them.

For you are my perfect rose.

Sigh....

Very nice.

[Steffi]

Really beautiful
In the beginning you can really get a sense of how much you care for the person and teh desperation of how much you dont want them to go.

[Dead Angel]

aawww, how sweet!! very romantic, i can so relate to this. there have been times when me and my boyfriend have been apart and i've felt the exact same way as you've described in this poem. very well done here mandy, i enjoyed it!! :)

[Dark Daughters]

What a beautiful piece, and it's wonderful to see some people can be mature about reviewing this piece and then there are some that lack that capacity, great job.
~Darkness~

[forfila]

Very deep love Amanda, you are a very special lady and this just goes to show that.

Beautiful.

Love you

Love
Me