The Winds of Change

changes

 

 

Like the flowing stream

The change of the season

The winds of change

Travel through time and reason

 

As the wind blows,

It goes through me

Taking with it the pain and despair

Leaving my heart and soul clean

 

The paths that are opened

Are there for me to choose

Up to me is what I decide

For the winds of change is upon me.

 

Reviews

I like this. I like how you wrote about change. How true your words are! Very beautiful! Great poem!

[Lalli]

a poem of change being your own responsiblity, by the freedom of choice. well done, i love how you tied it the concept of the constant change of wind into this piece. "the winds of change".. exactly why the title was perfeclty chosen..

much love n' respect

-Lalli

[Barbara Walker]

I really like this poem, Amanda. The subject matter, the imagery and the wind for metaphor. It's inspired a little poem I will post. Good read! Barbara

[Corey Lunare-]

For the winds of change is upon me....I dn't like change myself but it an be a good thing. As it wouldseem it does in you poem here. You did a fantastic job on this, bravo Amanda!

[Sean M. Addams]

great imagery in this one avery brillant piece .... great job on this!!!

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This is good. I liked the vivid images your poem brought to mind. I think it really represents the changes we need sometimes to make. Very good!!

[Poeticpiers]

vividly descriptive of your mood. Change is inevitable even ones taste in music changes through time

[Blake Q Hatfield]

Very refeshing. The wind coming over you and making things better. Change for the better, the excitement and calming effect of what may come! Very uplifting piece!

[magyk13]

good writing, the vividity is very fantasical

[Steffi]

I think you painted a really nice image with your imagery :D
Good write!