Discovery

a path to self...

  

The seeking of knowledge

The path to awareness

Finding where the path leads

The journey, the destination

 

The beauty of the soul

The purity of heart

The unshakeable faith

The unconditional love

 

Thoughts and images

The past and the present

The molding of future

Discovery.

 

Author's Note

Not too sure where this is leading, just the thoughts of what i would think one would need to promote deep thinking on the path to self-discovery.

Reviews

[Touché Armada]

The seeking of knowledge, thats such a great and ambiguous subject, because it's mainly founded on personal awareness, or a set of rules.. But the beauty of self, soul, the radiating of ones heart that is an unshakable trust/faith/knowing, the destination and the knowledge that we discover on the way, is everything we feel and everything we touch and everything that touches us, everything that at some point becomes tangible out of an apparent dream, thats discovery.
Nice write.

[Xia]

Wow, this definitely made me stop and think for a moment. And it's so uncanny that I stop and read this right when I'm brainstorming for an idea about soul-searching! Your words were really inspiring. :) Thank you for sharing.

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This is good. It does make the reader think about where are they in life!! I love that. Very good poem!!

[Sean M. Addams]

good thought provoking piece with nice imagery and good flow.... great job on this piece

[Blake Q Hatfield]

I agree, this poem seems like a self dialouge where you are contemplating where you are and where you'll be. Yet another gread read!

[April Child]

Yes we are all on the path and the journey is as important as the destination. Nice thought provoking poem.

[Steffi]

I like the choppiness of this piece. In the road to self-discovery there is always bumps in the road and i think the choppy feel gave that feeeling to the reader which was a nice effect.

[Dark Daughters]

Wonderfully penned and very deep, you did a wonderful job on making the reader think about their own self discovery.
~Darkness~

[Dead Angel]

wow mandy, very good imagery here. its beautifully written and really makes the reader think. good job doll, really good job!! :)

[forfila]

I love it Amanda, like I love all of your writing, it is almost a poem of discovery on its own, dicovering dicovery in its self.
Beautiful

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