Clean

A rant/free verse/random words on a page.

  I want to be

  Pretty on the

  Inside. 

  I want to be covered

  In pearls and diamonds.

  I want to be the

  Girl with the prettiest

  Dress.

  I need to be Cinderella

  Again.

  I need to feel good

  About myself.

  I want to be pretty again.

  I want everyone to like me

  For who I am and not

  What I do.

  I want to be clean.

  I need to be sweet. 

Reviews

[Yina]

As long as you are yourself, that's the best you there can be:) Nice write though:)

[CharlesMonroe]

Thats really pretty (: and I totally agree with Murisaka!

[Murisaka]

its sweet touching and droll... nothing like wonderland.. sounds conformist almost, just wanting to be clean, get everyone to like you, gain everyone's approval.. why would you want any of that, who cares what others think, its unnecessary fluff.

[Short.Nerd]

Nice!

[trainwreck]

This was awesome.

[raindroplove]

you don't need to be any thing but you

[☯]

Wonderful and yearning. I feel that everyone feels this way once in a while. Great job and nicely written :)

[Jess Holden]

Oh very wonderful!!! Just amazing!! :)

[*[[ Cadence ]]*]

nicely done!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

aw, this really is touching, i can feel your emotions and desires through this very clearly