Clean

A rant/free verse/random words on a page.

  I want to be

  Pretty on the

  Inside. 

  I want to be covered

  In pearls and diamonds.

  I want to be the

  Girl with the prettiest

  Dress.

  I need to be Cinderella

  Again.

  I need to feel good

  About myself.

  I want to be pretty again.

  I want everyone to like me

  For who I am and not

  What I do.

  I want to be clean.

  I need to be sweet. 

Reviews

[kaylynnmelody♥]

aww this is a beautiful write! thank you for posting this and sending me a read request!

[Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of..]

Wow this was just.... amazing
It touched me, as I can relate to this
A gifted writer with an amazing piece!
100/100

[Solidad]

Seems as though you've stepped outside your element with this piece and in a good way. this was a clean cut poem and I really enjoyed it.Good work.

[Knoxxeh]

great job loved the poem :)

[Fabric Pulse]

Cutting edge honest.

[Queen of Fantasy]

This speaks the truth of many peoples lives and concious thoughts! Good job!

[Dillon Cotter]

Very good poem. It has the emotion and intensity of what you want within the lines.

Will

[laughinglullaby]

I like this one a lot. I can definitely relate.

[Jake]

Reflective and emotive. Nice and well written. Nice job.

[Kathryn]

the use of 'again' makes i sound like the poem is referring to something that you had, but have lost, and te general impression is fabulous. Another lovely write :)