My Wonderland

Many things are missing from my Wonderland...

  My wonderland is

  Not pretty,

  And filled with singing

  Flowers.

  It is dark and bloody,

  And filled with screaming

  Demons.

  My wonderland doesn't

  Have a wise caterpillar,

  Who gives me advice.

  It has a tall elder man

  Who sits in a chair

  And listens to me complain. 

  My wonderland is

  Not what I wanted it to be.

  It is not pretty and filled

  With singing flowers.

  It does not have a wise

  Caterpillar.

  It doesn't have you. 

Author's Note

Just some random thing...

Reviews

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Very very imaginative. I love how you compared everything to another. I especially liked the last line the best.
"It doesn't have you."
Killer ending. Great write :)

[halflives]

Aw thanks :D
Just kidding.
Very good. Very, very good. Very powerful, nice.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Awe that's sad, but cute write. I liked it. Thanks for sharing.