My Wonderland

Many things are missing from my Wonderland...

  My wonderland is

  Not pretty,

  And filled with singing

  Flowers.

  It is dark and bloody,

  And filled with screaming

  Demons.

  My wonderland doesn't

  Have a wise caterpillar,

  Who gives me advice.

  It has a tall elder man

  Who sits in a chair

  And listens to me complain. 

  My wonderland is

  Not what I wanted it to be.

  It is not pretty and filled

  With singing flowers.

  It does not have a wise

  Caterpillar.

  It doesn't have you. 

Author's Note

Just some random thing...

Reviews

[HopelesslyDevoted]

the flow on this is incredible!

[Kathryn]

Loved it :) I watched alice in wonderland today, and you have perfectly framed the opposite of the disney image of it :) well written :)

[Gone]

it's wonderful for being random

[Yina]

Well hopefully this special 'you' will join you in your wonderland:)

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

I really loved the beginning. Great job!

[Fabric Pulse]

Tragedies happen, but you gotta take it and run with it, learning yourself. =]

[A]

This is sad and I can relate to it, you did a great job with the imagery, loved it!

[raindroplove]

i like it....

[Peter Joseph Swanson]

A wonderful poem!

[Sweet Little Bunny]

very decriptive. well writen as well.