My Wonderland

Many things are missing from my Wonderland...

  My wonderland is

  Not pretty,

  And filled with singing

  Flowers.

  It is dark and bloody,

  And filled with screaming

  Demons.

  My wonderland doesn't

  Have a wise caterpillar,

  Who gives me advice.

  It has a tall elder man

  Who sits in a chair

  And listens to me complain. 

  My wonderland is

  Not what I wanted it to be.

  It is not pretty and filled

  With singing flowers.

  It does not have a wise

  Caterpillar.

  It doesn't have you. 

Author's Note

Just some random thing...

Reviews

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

The Wonderland of reality

[Coyote Poetry]

In the new version of Alice in Wonderland. Caterpillar wasn't always nice till the end. Life is what you make it. Can be a living hell or a search for peace and calm. Choice of each person. I like your description. I was surprised by the positive ending. Even you can be saved. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[livelovelaugh98]

Amazing poem.

[Aurora Lynn]

Random doesn't mean 'bad'. I quite liked this poem. Quite often our 'Wonderlands' are not what most people would consider 'wonderful'. Very well written.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

so unique I liked it a lot amazing flow and the imagery was oddly beautiful lol

[darkness*star1985]

Wonderful work, excellent poem, i really like your world of wonderland.

[brenda]

what unique place to go i love the poem:)!

[NickyGL]

well the "wise caterpiller" was just a guy who was high all the time. And wonderland was very dark and blood. Twisted really, they suger coat it for kids. But any way i like this poem. nice work!

[Ravyne Hawke]

I love form of this poem and the repetition of the flowers and the caterpillar. My wonderland isn't exactly what I want it to be either. I have longings that haven't been met yet... and you expressed your longing with the last line so very well. Excellent poem! Definitely a fave and a 100/100 rating.

[A.E. Surdam]

It's not random. I really much loved this. I have my own wonderland also, as I gaze into the void and imagine. Though when we come out we see that the world is not always what we wanted it to be. This expresses it very nicely. And I am glad to have read it. :)