Let Us Be Heard

Writing a lot of stuff about war and revenge O.O

  We have been dying

  For too long.

  We will be heard this time.

  Come now,

  freaks and

  monsters.

  Let us rise

  From the ground

  Where they have 

  Killed us.

  Join us,

  creeps and

  stalkers.

  Let us be free

  From the rumors

  They told everyone

  About us.

  We will be heard.

  We will scream and fight.

  We win this battle today.

Reviews

[Jake]

The form works well to emphasise important sequences. But one quick pointer, I always think that poems with this sort of emotion work so much better if they rhyme. Still a great job though.

Jake

[Sukriti Suki]

a rebel always attracts me like a magnet..I want in!

[Chris]

Yes! Luckily, I'm a monster, so I can take part in this rebellion! :D
Bravo Alice.

[Fabric Pulse]

So strong and powerful, a rebellion!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

a very strong write! and very encouraging! i love it! you truly are courageous at heart!

[Kathryn]

Strangely this remonds my of my second year in junior school, but I won't go through all of that. Lets just say it wasn't a nice year. Your words are both strong and painfully accurate, while still capturing a certain beauty. I love your style of writing, this poem expecially.

[*[[ Cadence ]]*]

looooved this (:

[DearSweetAgony]

WOW
This reminds me of my poem/lyrics Legion Of The Worthless.
This reminds me A LOT of my poem.
This is a good poem.

Interesting poem. A twisted insight of the damned. Referring to the league of the vanquished as 'freaks and monsters' shouts volumes. A lot of hostility is hidden, but who is it aimed at?