Let Us Be Heard

Writing a lot of stuff about war and revenge O.O

  We have been dying

  For too long.

  We will be heard this time.

  Come now,

  freaks and

  monsters.

  Let us rise

  From the ground

  Where they have 

  Killed us.

  Join us,

  creeps and

  stalkers.

  Let us be free

  From the rumors

  They told everyone

  About us.

  We will be heard.

  We will scream and fight.

  We win this battle today.

Reviews

[trainwreck]

This was a strong write. I liked the use of small words and short stanzas. The reading rhythm was close to a march. Good job!

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Good write ; )

[Coyote Poetry]

Need some Bob Dylan and Edwin Starr music. You would be a revolution then. I like the strong and positive feel of this poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Aurora Lynn]

Another powerful poem! The line 'We have been dying/For too long.' was my favorite line of the whole thing. Thank you for writing!

[brenda]

yeah!! cause if everybody was normal which there is no such thing it wouldnt be unique love it!:)

[Ravyne Hawke]

Powerful write.. love the last line!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

You have a calling as a song writer.
This is excellent work!

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Really powerful and cool!

[Yina]

Wow I could totally picture this! Kinda creepy but really cool:)

[Patches I'm not so new..]

Now this one is positive I actually enjoyed reading this one as opposed to some of the others you have written it has a positive, not a defeatest attitude. I do not see this as a "revenge" poem per se but as one that states in no uncertian terms that we have had enough and will not stand for more Brilliant IMHO