People Like You F**k People Like Me

People Like You F**k People Like Me

A Poem by Alice In My Own Wonderland
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The title is a line from the song Samantha by Hole.

"
  You always hurt people
  Like me.

  Why do you hurt us?

  It is interesting for you
  To see us freak out
  And break down?

  Guys like you always promise
  Words to girls like me.

  Why do you waste your
  Time on us?

  Do you think it's funny
  To see us cry when 
  You leave us?

  You always misjudge people
  Like us.

  Why do you say we are nothing?

  Does it make you feel proud
  To see people like us
  Die?

  Today we will not be used.

  Today will be the day
  When the tables turn
  And we win. 

© 2011 Alice In My Own Wonderland


Author's Note

Alice In My Own Wonderland
I am deciding that every Good Friday is also known as National Losers Win Day.
Also, this poem is kind of stupid :P

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Very optimistic and beautiful write.I hope you read my Good Friday.
yours JVL

Posted 13 Years Ago


A lovely read, and not stupid at all. I would maybe build on it a little between 'today we will not be used' and 'and we win.', but other than that it is pefect. I love the critisism you have packed into the first few lines, and how convincing the challenges posed in the poem sound. well done :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


not stupid at all..i def. relate to this...and i think its an excellent poem (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


Not a stupid poem at all. It starts off good gets stronger then kinda ends. I would suggest you let feed it and let it grow.

Posted 13 Years Ago


it's not stupid. i really love this poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I enjoyed reading this a lot.
"Do you think it's funny
To see us cry when
You leave us?"
I love this line because it describes the types of guys that aren't worth our time. The worst types of people. They would think exactly this. Very nicely written :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


OOOOOoooh, I love the poem, it ignite fire within my soul as I think of all the times I have heard the lines of someone tellling me it won't work out. Sometimes it's for the best, I suppose. Because friends and boyfriends, and lovers, are like seasons, we must learn to let them go.

Posted 13 Years Ago


sad thing is boys grow into men but rarely change~
love your author's note too!~

Posted 13 Years Ago



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