All Of The Insults People Have Said To Me

All Of The Insults People Have Said To Me

A Poem by Alice In My Own Wonderland

  Yes, I am a stalker-
  I follow you at night.
  Yes, I am a b***h-
  I speak my mind.
  And you were totally
  Right when you said
  I was a s**t.
  I slept with everyone
  On the face of the earth.
  And you are correct, darling.
  I am crazy-
  I believed everything
  You said to me.
  

© 2011 Alice In My Own Wonderland


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Alice In My Own Wonderland
Messy...

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interesting..i enjoyed it (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


It is a tiny bit messy,
but all in all very good.
I love the emotion in your poems.
You are very talented.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice poem here. really good show of some 'talent in the raw' so to speak. My only suggestion would be to look at the 'on the face of the earth' line. Gives your point but kills the feeling and flow of the poem. just reword a little maybe.

Posted 13 Years Ago


A good little adage at the end, but overall, I just caught the emotional output of this. Your emotions are key parts of your poems. I'd call you an expressionist.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Interesting write. Simply showed your emotions here with such great perfection. The best part was that you wrote the accusations against you very well.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow < was on my mind when I was done reading this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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This is all definitely true. We automatically get judged by simple actions. People refuse to learn the whole story, and make up useless rumors. Mostly because of jealousy. It's not messy, and you did a really good job :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was really good, and definitely not messy. Everybody does that with at least one person. Good job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


No, it is good. Not, messy. It is very interesting to have read. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


it not really messy . its good but i think you could have kept goin .

Posted 13 Years Ago



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