Rewind, Replay, Pause And Stop.
A Poem by
Alice In My Own Wonderland
I don't know...
I want to rewind
Time, as if it
Were a movie.
I want to replay
All the perfect
Moments we spent
Together.
I want to pause
The moment where
Everything fell apart.
I want to stop
Life.
I want to never be
played again.
© 2011 Alice In My Own Wonderland
Author's Note
This is bad.
Reviews
I love the way you laid this poem out...the red/black This is a brilliant poem ...very good1
Posted 13 Years Ago
Good one Alice, if only we could rewind time my friend.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Good one Alice, if only we could rewind time my friend.
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Ain't a bad poem. You desire what we all would want. Able to rewind time and hold on to the good moments. A strong ending to a very good poem.
Coyote
Posted 13 Years Ago
Ain't a bad poem. You desire what we all would want. Able to rewind time and hold on to the good moments. A strong ending to a very good poem.
Coyote
0 of 6 people found this review constructive.
this is so not bad it was brilliant ... sounds like a couple of lines in a few of my poem lol you went further with it and did a really good job
Posted 13 Years Ago
this is so not bad it was brilliant ... sounds like a couple of lines in a few of my poem lol you went further with it and did a really good job
0 of 5 people found this review constructive.
again another great poem, you are on a role keep it going girl, way to go
Posted 13 Years Ago
again another great poem, you are on a role keep it going girl, way to go
This was cool! it was a unique idea. Great job.
Posted 13 Years Ago
This was cool! it was a unique idea. Great job.
stop it ! no poem of yours is bad is great !!
Posted 13 Years Ago
stop it ! no poem of yours is bad is great !!
0 of 2 people found this review constructive.
I don't think this is bad! I like the whole concept...if only we could have this control over our lives. Things would be a lot easier.
Posted 13 Years Ago
I don't think this is bad! I like the whole concept...if only we could have this control over our lives. Things would be a lot easier.
This is brilliant, Alice.. not bad at all.. an excellent poem with great usage of imagery.. the last stanza is a zinger! I concur.
Posted 13 Years Ago
This is brilliant, Alice.. not bad at all.. an excellent poem with great usage of imagery.. the last stanza is a zinger! I concur.
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