Rewind, Replay, Pause And Stop.

I don't know...

  I want to rewind

  Time, as if it

  Were a movie.

  I want to replay

  All the perfect

  Moments we spent

  Together.

  I want to pause

  The moment where

  Everything fell apart.

  I want to stop

  Life.

  I want to never be

  played again. 

Author's Note

This is bad.

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

I love the way you laid this poem out...the red/black This is a brilliant poem ...very good1

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Good one Alice, if only we could rewind time my friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

Ain't a bad poem. You desire what we all would want. Able to rewind time and hold on to the good moments. A strong ending to a very good poem.
Coyote

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

this is so not bad it was brilliant ... sounds like a couple of lines in a few of my poem lol you went further with it and did a really good job

[darkness*star1985]

again another great poem, you are on a role keep it going girl, way to go

[trainwreck]

This was cool! it was a unique idea. Great job.

[brenda]

stop it ! no poem of yours is bad is great !!

[Aurora Lynn]

I don't think this is bad! I like the whole concept...if only we could have this control over our lives. Things would be a lot easier.

[Ravyne Hawke]

This is brilliant, Alice.. not bad at all.. an excellent poem with great usage of imagery.. the last stanza is a zinger! I concur.