Me VS. The Monsters

Me VS. The Monsters

A Poem by Alice In My Own Wonderland
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  I feel like a little girl 
  Again-afraid to go
  To sleep alone. 

  I am terrified of the
  Monsters that hide
  Under my bed.

  The demons that lurk
  Inside my head
  Alarm me. 

  I need you beside me,
  To hold me and protect
  Me from the nightmares.

  But you aren't here.

  It is me against the
  Monsters. 

  

© 2011 Alice In My Own Wonderland


Author's Note

Alice In My Own Wonderland
Just something I threw together.

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Another great poem my friend.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Good poem! I liked how it flowed. I remember when I was afraid of the monsters under my bed. You took that emotion that I felt and put it in a poem. Good job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I always somewhat say, 'never stand alone, but you are alone when it comes to what's in your head unvoiced,' you have to voice it openly with someone to ever be comforted, otherwise how will they know in the slightest hint as to how you truly are hurting?

Posted 13 Years Ago


Chilling. Very telling almost a coming of age realization piece, Very nice!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Your message is real...concise...and moving
Now you need to take pride in it...
It is a beautiful piece and well constructed...
There is nothing to change and certainly doesn't look thrown together...(not that there's anything wrong with that)..
A very nice write
allen


Posted 13 Years Ago


It's sweet.

Posted 13 Years Ago


its actually touching in a way... the comfort of having someone to hold, and their touch saving you... touching

Posted 13 Years Ago


It was so sweet. I just so loved it so much. It was a yearning to have someone with you but as he left you felt so alone. So tragic and yet romantic at the same time.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Really nice. I'm sure you'll defeat them!:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow

Posted 13 Years Ago



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