Nothing Is Left.

Mack and I broke up. Chloe is dead. Life is amazing, isn't it?

  Nothing is left.

  It is all gone.

  All of the smiles

  And laughs.

  All of the tears

  And insults.

  The only thing that

  Remains is my shattered

  Heart,

  Beaten and broken,

  Twitching on the floor.

  You took everything when you left. 

Author's Note

This sucks

Reviews

[WhoIsAmelia?]

it doesn't suck. it's simple, which is what I like about your style of writing. the basic lines also really work for the theme of the poem, because it's as if someone took all the words from your mouth (keyboard?) too. You have a great talent of getting your message across while saying so little. So while the subject is sad, you still have kick-a*s writing skills.

[trainwreck]

That was a very good poem, but a very tragic write. I miss Chloe, and I'm sorry about you and Mack. I guess that's just the way it is. Great write though.

[Katannaism]

This doesn't suck at all. Its simple, beautifully written and it expresses feelings well. It's a great job-Don't doubt urself so much. ;)

[A.E. Surdam]

It does not. The imagery it just lovely and splendid. You have your own way with words and you created this within your mind. And it means something to someone. And I just loved reading it. Be confident and proud of your work!

[Coyote Poetry]

It doesn't suck. You are showing human emotion and you are direct to the point in the poem. I like the emotion and the strong ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Rain]

Very strong and full of sadness. Watch some comedy movies? *grabs popcorn* cheer up soon :)

[Skateprincess]

Sad but simple a good write

[Yina]

Aw that's so sad. Life totally sucks eh?:(

[TheUnforgivinFallenAnge..]

Im sorry just try to smile, a smile can change everything

[Patches I'm not so new..]

why do you keep putting yourself and your pennings down? this is good I wish I'd thought of it. It is the simple poems that express most vividly the thoughts of the poet and make no mistake about it you "Alice" are a poet a fledging poet but still a poet. Your writings will improve with experence there is no help for it it is a natural phnomanon.

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

I feel your pain, time does heal the soul my friend.