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A Poem by Alice In My Own Wonderland

  I'm sick of the 
  Pain I am feeling
  All the time.

  I hate the way people
  Look at me.

  I need a new reputation.

  I need a new life. 

  I don't want to be
  The girl everyone sees. 

© 2011 Alice In My Own Wonderland


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Alice In My Own Wonderland
Something random I just threw together.

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It all starts now with a clean slate, but if you really want it like you say you do, you'll stop sending reminders to yourself of who the past you was in mistake, you will focus with a fierce determination of the new person you've always wanted to be, and that is how you'll sleep at night. The past is there, it won't leave in permanence, (sorry if I spelled that wrong), but you're supposed to only learn from it in your fault of what you can do to be better the next time a chance to make a memory comes in a rainbow painter bleed storm.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Everyone wants to be unique---- but in order to become unique youy have to do something to make you unique The poem is delightful I think it mirrors a universal desire.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Reminds me of the song I Don't Wanna Be Me by Type O Negative.
I feel like this sometimes.. just begin again in a new place..
I enjoyed this and it is relateable and well written .
I like the line "I need a new reputation"

Chloe

Posted 13 Years Ago


sometimes is best to start over again but do not change how you are just be yourself and dont give a fudge what they think about you.

Posted 13 Years Ago


wonderful to get you're emotions out.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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