Over

  I'm sick of the 

  Pain I am feeling

  All the time.

  I hate the way people

  Look at me.

  I need a new reputation.

  I need a new life. 

  I don't want to be

  The girl everyone sees. 

Author's Note

Something random I just threw together.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

To be the invisible person. Hard to do sometime. Some people are natural to attention as bees are to honey. I understand this poem. Easy to want not to be the center of attention for good or bad. A very good poem.
Coyote

[Rain]

This is a pretty good poem. It's short and simpl, that's what Ilike about it. You can figure out the meaning easily. Good poem

[☯]

I liked this a lot. It's short, and very thoughtful. It reminds me about washing away what happened before, and starting fresh, and striving for something more. Very nicely written. Great write :)

[Zack Burton]

That's very short and sweet, and, like you said, it does seem like you just threw it together. However, I feel like you've captured something in these simple lines - you may have a gift for that.

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[Rococopay]

Pretty good for just throwing it together, the way you have the words "Pain" and "Look" located in the writing causes great emphasis with those words.

And I agree with a comment I read below "We should always be who we are inside"

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[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

We should always be who we are inside my friend.

[A.E. Surdam]

Awwwww, it's so sad. I hope you feel happy now, then you did when you wrote this. Because you are loved, may not be the people you believe. But when people read your writing, you are loved. :) Remember this. And very nice poem. :) I hope this makes sense. Lol. And I am not confusing you. Well great work! >

[Mack Attack!]

Like what a once wise Eminem said, "you're never over."