What If I Died?

  What if I just dropped dead?

  That would make you happy,

  Wouldn't it?

  If my soul was just

  Sucked right out

  Of my body,

  And taken to hell.

  That would put

  A smile on your face,

  Wouldn't it? 

  All of you would laugh,

  And be thankful

  I am dead. 

  Don't worry.

  I will die soon. 

Author's Note

Probably gonna die soon. I don't know.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You are a odd writer sometime. Death will come. Few are content when life is stolen from them. No more opportunity for good or bad. Death is a dead end road. No way back and no more opportunity to dance, sing and laugh. A direct to the point poem. A very interesting poem.
Coyote

[kdpgrahi]

Just a sense of resignation. At some particular moments every one of us is gripped by such a feeling

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I'm sure you would survive an atom bomb...

You have too many things left to say for your business to be finished here.

You have also succeeded in scaring the hell out of me....(facepalm)

[SOUL LESS]

Makes me think you're just darned complexed. Screaming at yourself...or maybe you're just secretive. Like to keep your feelings bottled up. Dunno *shrug*

[Rain]

strong, raw emotions that are very depressing, expressed fully in this short piece.

[ChicagoMay]

Very powerful. Hopefully you don't die soon. You seem to have a lot of fans and friends, judging by the reviews below. :)

[Murisaka]

a powerful, sad piece... it makes me wonder who would be so heartless as to just watch someone die, to let them be taken without a care in the world.

[Mack Attack!]

You won't die. If you die, I go with you. Love you forever, Alice :)

[TheUnforgivinFallenAnge..]

I am the one who is suppose to die soon sad face =(

[kikieatszombies]

Wow this is powerful, again if you ever need to talk im here, and even though i don't know you it would be a tragedy if you died