My Death In A Movie

My death will be dramatic,

On a big screen with all eyes on me.

I will be falling from the sky.

I will be the fallen angel. 

My skin will be colored alabaster.

My hair will be dancing in the wind

As I fall down. 

And when I land on the ground,

Blood will drip from my head.

Everyone will gasp and start to cry.

I will get a standing ovation. 

I will be the star of the show.

I will have my revenge. 

Author's Note

Really weird :/ I don't know...

Reviews

[Misty Blue Eyes]

this is interesting. how you see the end of a life. i like it

[BlueberryKisses]

I wouldn't say weird, I'd say it was different or original, I really like this, good job!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Weird - yes, but unique, frictionlessly uninhibited and relaxed, I had to read it a few times because the flow is broken, but great imagery, well done!

[Jake]

Love the form. It's almost as if the way you have set out the poem reflects the narrative. Intentional?

[Coyote Poetry]

Remind me of the tales of dreamers who always seem to fall into a pit. They would forced them self to awake. They fear death would come if they hit the ground. I like how you set-up the poem. Strong description and story. Sometime revenge can backfire. Who know if the next place is any better? A excellent poem.
Coyote

[CharlesMonroe]

I like it alot, dark, but beautiful. Great job (:

[Queen of Fantasy]

I love poems not always classed as "normal".
This is so perfect!

[trainwreck]

This was a very good write. I love the theme and the illistrations you used here. Great job.

[Vanessa Rico]

I really, really liked this! I feel like you put a lot of effort into this and was superb!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

some of the weirdest poems are the best! genius material!