My Death In A Movie

My Death In A Movie

A Poem by Alice In My Own Wonderland

My death will be dramatic,
On a big screen with all eyes on me.

I will be falling from the sky.

I will be the fallen angel. 

My skin will be colored alabaster.

My hair will be dancing in the wind
As I fall down. 

And when I land on the ground,
Blood will drip from my head.

Everyone will gasp and start to cry.

I will get a standing ovation. 

I will be the star of the show.

I will have my revenge. 

© 2011 Alice In My Own Wonderland


Author's Note

Alice In My Own Wonderland
Really weird :/ I don't know...

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I have often thought bought my life in an act... Weird can be a good thing, it actually means you are normal.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Well it must be said the persona in this poem certianly knows how to make AN EXIT! Nicely written and a great dream (I hope that's all it is.) you have much to live for don't throw it into a deep dark hole!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Its noy weird just great

Posted 13 Years Ago


o.o interesting ^.^

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great use of description and imagery. Not a hugely wierd poem. Just unique and very good too. how do i want to die? of old age. plain and boring. and this poem is the complete opposite :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like it. Good describtion. I like the fact of the Fallen Angel XP

Posted 13 Years Ago


Really great and sweet yet dark!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Really strong imagery in this. I love the use of alabaster to describe your skin, it really brings out a sense of paleness. The last line, "I will have my revenge." doesn't vibe with the rest of the poem very well, though.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Interesting. Just wondering.... what's alabaster? I'm sure you'd be a beautiful angel:) (not meant in a bad way)

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow that is powerful. I loved it.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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In your brain. There is some weird stuff here...



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