I Hope You Remember.

I Hope You Remember.

A Poem by Alice In My Own Wonderland
"

He knows who he is...

"
I hope you remember my face every time
You look at her.

I hope you remember every conversation
we had perfectly.  

I hope you remember the three
last words you said to me.  

I hope you remember how badly
You hurt me.

I need you to remember your love
For me. 

© 2011 Alice In My Own Wonderland


Author's Note

Alice In My Own Wonderland
He should know who he is...

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i bet he does know who he is... lol love this

Posted 13 Years Ago


Fantastically finery, with a raw, stripped emotion, grammatically perfect also, which is no easy feat, good for you, well done!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I don't know. Some old song from the seventies. "Love is a four letter word". Can scar and leave you barely alive. A strong and direct poem. I learn with too many years of life. Leave the B.S behind and go forward. Last line can be trouble for both people. I learned never leave a woman too long to think of revenge and disappointment. A outstanding poem. I like it.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is very strong, I can practicly see somebody screaming this at a guy. Good job

Posted 13 Years Ago


It is so relateable and I love the feeling and passion behind it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is great. love it

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow is all i can say. another good job

Posted 13 Years Ago


There's this icon I have somewhere which says "Don't feel bad, he's with a w***e anyway."

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is great! It is extremely effective, good job :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


amazing!! really deep hopefully he is not a coward and accepts what you are saying:) i love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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