I don't want your life to end! I want to become good friends! I hope your day turns better. From a frown to an upside down smile. No matter what remember this, "If you are going through hell, keep walking." "What doesn't kill me, makes me stronger."Our greatest glory is not in never falling, but in rising every time we fall." "To live is the rarest thing in the world. Most people do exist that's all." Remember these whenever you are sad. I do, I have them all over my room. For encouragement! I really do hope your day is better. :)
You are correct. Not a positive ending to the poem. Sometime best wish is for quiet and time to think. Funny part about love. After I gave up on love. Couldn't stop love from coming. Maybe if we want something to much. Can't have it. A very good poem.
Coyote
Neveer wish for your life to end! It might not be perfect, but no one has a perfect life! I understand you wanteing to live your life your way, but never wish for the end!
The poems you write arnt that bad, the very good for someone who had a bad day. When Im down i cant really write it brings all the bad crap that happned up and i cant deal with them. So i think its great you can still write when having a bad day. And if a poem did come out bad, its okay later on you can fix it. This Poem says a lot. You dont really need all the this that people talk about you grow tired of it all and just want it to end a soon as it can. life is like glass, you have to be careful or it could brake into a million little peices. But in a way, by living a hard life means to be born with a million pieces and you needing to put them together with out cutting yourself..... This was a good poem im starting to rambel now sooo, keep writing!
Well, I definitely dont want your life to end. You have such talent girl! Do not let the stress get to you! Life is hard, believe me I know, but through your struggles you become a better, stronger you!
D: Dont feel depressed. There's too much in life for it to end, no matter how s****y it is at the moment..like mine >_>"
As for the quality of the poem, its alright. Makes enough sense to me, and I had a good time reading it.
dont like my poems? too bad.
dont like me? well the block button is write over there next to the flag button.
dont like my friends? suck it.
dont like anything? die already.
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