I'm A Ghost

LIFE. F*****G. SUCKS.

  The fight is over.

  It is done.

  The passion has died. 

  Now, I am nothing.

  I am now just a ghost,

  Floating around. 

  I have no one to love. 

  No one loves me.

  Which is why I am nothing. 

  Just a ghost,

  Looking for something

  That never existed. 

Reviews

[Brandi Espy]

Wow, this is deep; love it!! (:

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

I have felt this at times, the feeling as if I didn't exist. Great poem.

[CharlesMonroe]

I remember feeling like this all the time. But I found someone who pulled me out of the gutter, and it's still hard, but now it seems that I'm the one pulling other people out of the gutter. And I'm the least likley person to ever feel happy. So I know you can. Things will get better (:

[Yina]

Wonderful poem! You're not alone in that, that's for sure!

[Queen of Fantasy]

I love this poem!
It perffectly illustrates my life!
It is so well writen!
All of your poems are so great!

[Short.Nerd]

Outstanding!

[Patches I'm not so new..]

Sometime this mood hits all of us writers if not for our depth of feeling how could we write I feel the pain of the persona of the piece

[NickyGL]

this is a very good poem, its got great meaning and you can clearly see what you mean. i really enjoyed this poem.

[DearSweetAgony]

I think everyone has felt this way
at one point in time.
Great Poem!

[Coyote Poetry]

I have been a ghost by my own choice many times. I needed time to re-check my life and needs. Love is a two way street. Sometime we must give more then we received. Love is the easiest and hardest gift to share. Just must find people with same dreams and goals. A excellent poem. I like it.
Coyote