You Can't Forget...

No matter how hard you

Try, you can never forget

The way that person

Would look at you.

You can't forget the

Way that person would

Touch you. 

You can't forget the

Words that person would

Say to you.

You can never forget your first love. 

Author's Note

Kind of bad. Review please?

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is in-your-face work. You got straight to the heart of the matter.
Great work!

[Solidad]

There are things most of us keep locked away in our secret places. I'm sure there are very few who CAN'T relate to this. But I don't think that just applies to a first love. I think it applies to anyone who you've loved more or differently. This is an upfront piece that is simply honest. Nice work.

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Actually, you can forget your first love if you move on.

[Patches I'm not so new..]

Bad? If truth is bad, if feelings spoken of are bad than yes this is a terrible poem.

[Chris]

Kind of bad? I don't see a problem with it, you certainly got the point across and thats all that matters. You left it open so that others could fill in their personal feelings. Personally, I enjoyed it a lot. :]

[Vanessa Rico]

Too true, you never forget your first!

[Katannaism]

This is so true. And its not bad at all. Despite its short length, it spoke volumes. Again, the energy and emotion juxtaposed here was so powerful and raw. Just spewing with feeling.

[Rain]

Nah, its not bad. Simple, emotional, great. Love your style of writing poems. Last line by itself was powerful, and I guess its true...not really for me O_O"
I have vague memories...I guess when you like another person, it kinda...goes away?? :/

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Not kind of bad at all. Your lines are stripped bare, so that all is left for the reader is complete emotion. I love that imagery is simple but shocking, plain wording and original flow is refreshing, I find it balanced and contradictory. Well done, I loved it!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

no bad a all, i know what you mean.... its so hard to forget your first love. i know i'll never forget mine. :)