You

See Author's Note

You.

You are on my mind all day.

You are near me when I need someone to hold.

You are everything I have left.

If I lost you,

I would have no one.

Please don't make me lose you. 

Author's Note

None of you can know who he is. He is just called 'You'.

Reviews

[Joey Irwin]

Another brilliant poem by yourself :D
I love reading your writing. This reminds me of someone I used to know which is good. It can connect with others as well as yourself :D

[NickyGL]

Umm, this is a good poem. I really liked it. please keep writing. I'm sorry i didnt write all that much im still half a sleep (its 5am). sooo yeah good poem.

[Misty Blue Eyes]

i love the last stanza "please dont make me loose you" so powerful

[Rain]

hehe, a very sweet poem :]
I use "you" sometimes for writes, and they leave just as deep impression then with poems/stories with names, like this poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

Certain people are necessary to keep us sane. I like the emotion and the desire in your words. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Chris]

Awe. Alice, this is quite an adorable read. I don't even know if words can be adorable... But its the only thing that seems to get my point across. :]
'You' is quite a lucky person.

[A.E. Surdam]

Awww. It's so romantic. You. So sweet. So brillant. So nice. You can give this poem to your partner or lover and see their facial expressions. But I really liked this. It was very sweet and nice. Like chocolate. :)

[Fabric Pulse]

Sometimes you have to protect your own last remaining shred of privacy, understandable, you want a memory that's just between you and your heart, even while in your words. We all do it at moments knowing or not while writing. The imagery for this poem you wrote is very vivid, like concrete.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Power packed with emotion and undying devotion........

[pamzilla. &hear..]

It's short, simple, sweet and full of emotion.
Perfect :)