All Of Us Are Dead

All Of Us Are Dead

A Poem by Alice In My Own Wonderland
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We all die-of jealousy, sadness, disappointment, anger and happiness.

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We all died sometime
In our sad lives.

Maybe you died
When you had
 A bad mark 
On a test.

Maybe you died
When you saw
Your girlfriend
With another guy.

Maybe you died
When you had
Your first kiss.

Maybe you died
When you got
Grounded for a month.

Why did you die?

© 2011 Alice In My Own Wonderland


Author's Note

Alice In My Own Wonderland
I don't know. Kind of weird...

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this is really good. its unique.

Posted 13 Years Ago


ahaha I can relate to this poem so much. I think I've died a little so many times cos of a bad mark on a test :D
I really enjoyed reading this poem :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


in a way yes it is weird but it does portray a message that the things such as sins or poisonous emotions kill us a little inside. Not to mention the overwhelming sense of disappointment and pressure we put on ourselves.
I have horrid jealousy issues :( so I die a little each time

Posted 13 Years Ago


so true... your a great writer i must say!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I get what you are saying with this poem. Sometimes events happen that just change or "kill" a part of you. I know that I am a completely different person then I was 4 or 5 years ago, because of what I went through. I do look back at my experiences and sometimes I wish I was that carefree girl, who always laughed and smiled, again. I do not regret who I am today, because I know that I am stronger than I was then...but I do miss the innoncence once in a while. I truly love this poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I agree with Supervisory Special, this is actually an interesting poem, Great job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Its...actually pretty interesting.
I liked it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Interesting idea. Very well written :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


over-dramatic...

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like it. It takes how we all make every small thing that happens to us daily, and it kills us off a little on the inside.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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