All Of Us Are Dead

We all die-of jealousy, sadness, disappointment, anger and happiness.

We all died sometime

In our sad lives.

Maybe you died

When you had

 A bad mark 

On a test.

Maybe you died

When you saw

Your girlfriend

With another guy.

Maybe you died

When you had

Your first kiss.

Maybe you died

When you got

Grounded for a month.

Why did you die?

Author's Note

I don't know. Kind of weird...

Reviews

[cArTeR]

this is really good. its unique.

[Rain]

ahaha I can relate to this poem so much. I think I've died a little so many times cos of a bad mark on a test :D
I really enjoyed reading this poem :)

[Skateprincess]

in a way yes it is weird but it does portray a message that the things such as sins or poisonous emotions kill us a little inside. Not to mention the overwhelming sense of disappointment and pressure we put on ourselves.
I have horrid jealousy issues :( so I die a little each time

[HopelesslyDevoted]

so true... your a great writer i must say!

[Vanessa Rico]

I get what you are saying with this poem. Sometimes events happen that just change or "kill" a part of you. I know that I am a completely different person then I was 4 or 5 years ago, because of what I went through. I do look back at my experiences and sometimes I wish I was that carefree girl, who always laughed and smiled, again. I do not regret who I am today, because I know that I am stronger than I was then...but I do miss the innoncence once in a while. I truly love this poem!

[Miss Sally Sunshine]

I agree with Supervisory Special, this is actually an interesting poem, Great job.

[compositionc]

Its...actually pretty interesting.
I liked it.

[halflives]

Interesting idea. Very well written :)

[Zackery Alan Daley]

over-dramatic...

[Jake Staffeld]

I like it. It takes how we all make every small thing that happens to us daily, and it kills us off a little on the inside.