All Of Us Are Dead
A Poem by
Alice In My Own Wonderland
We all die-of jealousy, sadness, disappointment, anger and happiness.
We all died sometime
In our sad lives.
Maybe you died
When you had
A bad mark
On a test.
Maybe you died
When you saw
Your girlfriend
With another guy.
Maybe you died
When you had
Your first kiss.
Maybe you died
When you got
Grounded for a month.
Why did you die?
© 2011 Alice In My Own Wonderland
Author's Note
I don't know. Kind of weird...
Reviews
Many kinds of death. You ever see the faces of pro basketball players losing a game that was important. Defeat is a part of life. You can learn from it or allow the slow death to steal all your hope. I like the poetry that end with a question. This one did. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote
Posted 13 Years Ago
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I like this, it isn't weird, its original and that's good when doing poetry, not everything has to be about love or sadness, this is an interesting poem. It makes the reader think about the answer to your question :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
I like this, it isn't weird, its original and that's good when doing poetry, not everything has to be about love or sadness, this is an interesting poem. It makes the reader think about the answer to your question :)
This was an interesting write, and it certainly captured my attention. Good job.
Posted 13 Years Ago
This was an interesting write, and it certainly captured my attention. Good job.
Lovely, not weird at all. Poetry is true and questioning.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Lovely, not weird at all. Poetry is true and questioning.
A very interesting and profound sentiment. We all die in many ways and over and over, yet that's a part of life and part of what makes us human.
Posted 13 Years Ago
A very interesting and profound sentiment. We all die in many ways and over and over, yet that's a part of life and part of what makes us human.
I didn't---- I don't I just slip from one existence to another
The poem is a fantesy a well done fantesy enjoyed the read!
Posted 13 Years Ago
I didn't---- I don't I just slip from one existence to another
The poem is a fantesy a well done fantesy enjoyed the read!
this is a nice one. The greatest loss is what dies in us while we still live. Nice one
Posted 13 Years Ago
this is a nice one. The greatest loss is what dies in us while we still live. Nice one
weird -yes. lol but another nice write :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
weird -yes. lol but another nice write :)
This poem made me feel a bit uncomfortable.
It felt like you were reading my mind. lol.
It seemed like you knew all of my secrets.
I did love it. btw
Posted 13 Years Ago
This poem made me feel a bit uncomfortable.
It felt like you were reading my mind. lol.
It seemed like you knew all of my secrets.
I did love it. btw
Oooo...I always thought I was the only person to feel like this. We can die so many times and ways without actual real never coming back death. Very good!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Oooo...I always thought I was the only person to feel like this. We can die so many times and ways without actual real never coming back death. Very good!
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