You're Mine.

Another love poem XP

  I was running

  Away from my

  Problems.

  I was broken,

  I was tattered,

  I was sick and

  Tired.

  But then I

  Found you.

  You made me

  Stronger.

  You gave me love.

  You made me

  Put down the razor,

  And face everyone else.

  You are everything now.

  You are mine. 

 

Author's Note

:P Review please! :)

Reviews

[James Horsley]

Your writing is good. Truly. Nothing wrong with this piece, exactly. It's good, and I believe you really feel what you're writing, as it doesn't come across as artificial at all. I do suggest a little editing, though, just to make it shine a bit more. Give it a couple reads through, and see if you can't find a few places to tweak it, and make it truly yours. I mean this in the most constructive way: you could truly OWN this poem if you'd go in, expand on a few lines, and rework it to make it speak for itself in your own personal voice. I won't give away any particular lines, you'll learn more if you look for it on your own. =)

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Short and sweet!

[NadzB]

I really really like this :)

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Simply outstanding.

[misha]

This is really good, its amazing what love can do. =) keep it up.

[Arianna]

i love it