You're Everything I Want.

You're Everything I Want.

A Poem by Alice In My Own Wonderland
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Another love poem. Leave reviews please!

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You're funny.

You're cute.

You're romantic.

You're perfect.

And out of all 
Of the girls
In the world,

You picked me. 

You're everything
I want.

You're everything I need. 

© 2011 Alice In My Own Wonderland


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A beautiful and positive poem of love. Ain't no better days then to be content and in love. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very good:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is sweet, such a nice little poem, good job :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Tears. It's so romantic, again. I'm a big sobber when it comes to romantic movies. Like "You've Got Mail" or "Gone with the Wind" even though some may find them corny or boring, I'll be like, "It's so sad.........but beautiful, though I have no one. Wahhhh"
Your poem was so beautiful. Truly, it was.
A.E.S

Posted 13 Years Ago


Made me smile. (For real)

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is cool work. You could make a lucrative career as a song writer. lol.
Something about your rhythm tends to come across as punk for me.


Posted 13 Years Ago


This is cute, sweet and delicate. Great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Short and sweet. Though not typical, and the stanzas were quite unique.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Simple and sweet! This almost sounds like a greeting card. Nice.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Simple, honest and direct...sometimes that's all you need. Nice.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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