In Love

A little stupid love poem :P

When you kiss my

Lips, I can

Feel a real spark

Between us.

And when you

Stare at me

That way,

I can feel

My heart beat

Faster.

You are everything

I could ever need.

And I love you.

I need you.

Author's Note

It's really cheesy. And short. But whatevs, please review!! XX :)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem of love. It is short and to the point. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[♥Chloe-The-Zombi..]

I KNOW WHO YOU ARE TALKING ABOUT! mwafafafaaaa finally the crazy white girl has the power O.O
i loved this poem though. it was really really really really really VERY VERY cute! keep writing, young alice...

[BlueberryKisses]

I dont think this is cheesy, I think its sweet :)

[Short.Nerd]

Very good! Keep up the good work:)

[A.E. Surdam]

Forget the word cheesy. It was brillant. Seriously. I'm just me, and a little crazy. But it was beautiful. It makes me lick my lips hoping for a kiss from a hunk of a guy. Lol. Though it was very interesting and keep up the good work!

[Fabric Pulse]

Hopefully that school girl crush passion will stay alive!

[hopelove]

i like it

[BriAnna Wyble]

this is my favorite of what ive read so far! its simple and beautiful :)

[hailey]

aww that cute

aw, i love this. It just so real of teenage emotions.