sky at the night

It's about the sky I love. It will come after the rainy day.

get back your color

get back you life

while no clouds spread over you

I will see the night

when the stars come to my dream

and say, "Get your peace."

Author's Note

It's my first poem here.... I am not a native in English. Maybe the grammar or dictions is poor.

Need your advice. ^_^

Reviews

[Just Plain Me]

Its simple and sweet :)
i love this poem :)

[WildRose]

I really liked how you described everything.

Great job!

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[Sammy]

Hi,
I Like This Poem It Was A Great Read.
I Look Forward To Reading More Of Your Writing.

Sammy-Jo (n_n)

[Hello Kitty]

Good! It is very pretty good adjetives, and you also have an excelant meter! =)

[Aimee Mahathy]

I like this! It's very soft and sweet- much like the night sky.
Your English is very good! I'm amazed that you are not native, but you write poetry in English! It's amazing!
The only main problem I saw was in the second line, you simply wrote "you" instead of "your".
I loved the wording of the final line "Get your peace." Like the stars are offering it to you!
Beautiful!