satans art work

SANTAN’S ART WORK

 

 

 

LYING HERE

WITH MY HEART IN MY HAND

TRYING MY BEST

TO STOP THE BLEEDING IF I CAN

 

IT’S HARD BECAUSE

I DON’T KNOW WHERE THE BLEDDING IS AT

DID YOU STAB ME

IN THE FRONT, SIDE OR BACK

 

I THOUGHT THAT WE

WERE MUCH BETTER THAN YOU SHOWED

IF YOU WANT TO LEAVE

WHY DIDN’T YOU JUST HIT THE DOOR

 

MAYBE YOU WANTED TO GO

BUT THE PARTING WORDS JUST WOULDN’T COME OUT

SO YOU JUST WASTED THE REST OF OUR TIME

IN AN EFFORT TO GET KICKED OUT

 

YOU SLAMMED ME

WHEN YOU COULD HAVE EASILY SET ME DOWN

I PRAYED FOR TRUE LOVE

AND SATAN SENT YOU DOWN

 

I GUESS THAT I OVERLOOKED

THE ANGEL THAT GOD SENTFOR ME

SANTAN’S ART WORK WAS SO FINE

THAT BEYOND YOU I COULDN’T SEE.

 

 

 

                              after vision

Reviews

[Sabbath_Nikole]

Interesting, type at the top but i see the guy below me already pointed that out. Nice ryhming you got going on up top. I dig it. Love that last stanza of yours.

[Rory CJ Frankson]

2nd stanza 2nd line [ edit oops, ** THE BLEDDING ** ] If it's not excuse the pointing. If it is post an I'll come back an erase this review... or part of it.
[ 6 @ 2 ** SENTFOR ** ]
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SANTAN’S ART WORK

Love and Diamonds, glitter seed of destructor. As it had sparkle once an was, delicious. Mad Love is the extreme, always! If the heat of passion as expressed here turn, and. The Lies of Satan eat in the vitals of Loves relation, and the... disordered dream, a now fairytale. That can't reach, an equatable end.
The one of the other half... Hurts and Tread, upon...
Satan always the worm. Gets, into the Play!

Pathos, the scene of debauchery and blood fills scenes scream. Dream...

***************************** Dies & bleeds out. The heart Breaks ***************************

Poets share the blame, lovers go their way. With off color memory untamed games. I hear you and this was a ah very cool lay out, and the knife.

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****************************** we read and share it all in your light *************************

Romon in Review 05/28/10.
3:57 magnum time for a*s-hole Satan's to shred in the pm. Hmmm,
*Aha* an no... Heart & Soul --- Peace --- Ro.

[Sam Severn]

I love the title n' I love the rap-like sing-song rhythm of the rhymes n' I love the anguish in these lines n' I love the speed you delivery everything, just lickety-split fast as hell n' so it hits you like a train wreck! AWESOMENESS N' COOLNESS!!! ㋡