thunder

solutions to the world
that i surround myself in
can be traced to the sound
of thunder in a can

 

easy fix forecasted
simple steps layed out
but the so-called professionals
know not what they talk about

 

how can they prescribe
man-made for my woman made
thunder strikes my lemon
rain feeds me lemonade

 

after vision pulls 20/20
clearly is the focus on the broken hearted trail
directed to sleep in my wake
until i can make bail

after vision

Reviews

[Sabbath_Nikole]

This is really good. I totally dig this. The second stanza's probably my favorite. I just love how you worded it. The third stanza with the lemonade and lemon's thats a really cool analogy. Great Write man.

[*Always be Me:)*]

very nice very beautiful

[Honey]

I thought this poem was hauntingly beautiful. i especially liked the line, "thunder strikes my lemon/rain feeds me lemonade." Nice job!