think of meA Poem by aftervisionlifeThink of Me
Think of me
While you're thinking of you Think of me
Because I'm half of two Think of me
And that what I want is important Think of me Your so-called subordinate Think of me
Before you make plans for us Think of me
When your eyes are filled with lust Think of me The one that cries out for affection Think of me
The one that searched for direction Think of me
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i loved the repitions.how they set up the stage and the content reminds me of sylvia plath's Abominitions.
Posted 14 Years Ago |
I really like the format of this, it's written very nicely.
Think of me I say before it's to late Think of me Before you seal your fate That is my favorite part. Posted 14 Years Ago |
This is like talking to some aspects as part of the collective being. The title is exactly the same words I would tell me and myself. This is just brilliant! Keep writing.
Posted 14 Years Ago |
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Added on May 11, 2010
Last Updated on May 11, 2010
4 Reviews
Added on May 11, 2010
Last Updated on May 11, 2010
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aftervision
flooding in, TN
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a poet of life -- having lived life with my heart on my sleeve more..Writing
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