i and eye

haiku

why can't i just be

 

without eye having to cry

 

when i come to you

 

 

after vision

Reviews

[Not A Writer]

I don't get this write. sry

[Gomer LePoet]

Neyece work here. a great picture with only 15 words.

[Simpleasures]

Brilliant, and great question!

[Mitch*Dandy]

I love haikus! This is very simple but I LOVE IT!! I like how you use the terms "Eye" and "I" it makes it more cute! Love it 100/100

[R.S. Wilder]

This is so unusual, I can't help but love it.
"Without eye having to cry"

Keep it up!