8 feb 8

8 feb 8

A Poem by aftervision
"

no name just a date

"
 

slow motion

as i turn away from your closed door


we had a chance

to be so much more


trust was lost

and pain was found


you thought that you

had the only heart that fell down


slow motion and silence

two things that do not mix


open up -- please

so that this probelm can get fixed

 

after vision

 

© 2010 aftervision


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Good write! Nostalgic, and poignant, especially your ending line "after vision". I enjoyed this a lot!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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aftervision
aftervision

flooding in, TN



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a poet of life -- having lived life with my heart on my sleeve more..

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