our family tree

life of love

Our family tree

 

Don’t want sex

From your body tonight

Don’t want love

If love isn’t right

 

Just need the touch

Softness of the warmth

That’s born of your skin

 

Need to lay with you

Until your love �" begins

 

There is no fantasy

That I desire from you

Just want to be here

When your love passes through

 

Don’t want sex

For sex is much too weak

Don’t want love

To sleep only beneath the sheets

 

I need the things

That inspires poet’s thoughts

I need to be that fly

In your web �" caught

 

Make me the way

That you dream �" to be made

Sell me to you

Make me your slave

 

Be for me �" both sides of the coin

Both happiness and joy �" combined

Hide me -- then count

Then come �" to find

 

Share with me �" all

Receive the same from me

Plant with me the memories

That will one day become �" our family tree

 

after vision

 

 

Reviews

[Simpleasures]

"I need the things

That inspires poet’s thoughts

I need to be that fly

In your web " caught"

I'm loving those four lines so much.
This piece really shows the heart of a genuine lover, one that desires a deeper connection than the normal shallow things we tend to look for. That's a rare quality and this is a wonderful piece, like all I have read.

[Nirmala]

'Just want to be here when your love passes through' - the depth of this poem will touch many a heart when they want more than the body, they need the soul involved. Really liked it!

[A.Lee]

This is really good :) I like the way the family tree came into play at the end. Well written from beginning to end.

[Nameless]

Perty good and true. I liked it.

[deeps]

This is amazing, I liked this write bunches.
This flows so amazing. Very well written as well.
Loved the rhyme scheme.