none of you

None of you

 

If I can’t be with you tonight

Trust �" that I want to make it right

 

If I am the blue

In your blues

Let me help

Let me comfort what ever route you choose

 

Open the arms of your heart

Allow me to feed your soul

Close your eyes and receive me

Don’t let loneliness take control

 

Know that tonight

When you can’t be by my side

I offer you a place to lay

A place where “none of you” �" has to hide

 

I know you �" and love you

The miles can never erase that

I can’t be with you tonight

So I’ll wait �" and I’ll wait �" until you bring love back

 

after vision

 

 

Reviews

[Simpleasures]

"I offer you a place to lay
A place where “none of you” " has to hide"

Those two lines said it all for me, poet. I'm on my way! : )

[A.Lee]

This is good. Your poems all have a very sensual feel to them. Heartfelt and moving. I like the lines "If I am the blue / in your blues / let me help". Well done, again.

[Nameless]

U sure got talent. Keep up the writing.

[deeps]

This is wonderful, I enjoyed this write alot.
I thought this was an amazing write.
Such a wonderful flow.